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Dating app pe pehli date — ek comedy of errors
Galat café, galat time, aur ek insaan jo phir bhi ruk gaya.
Chandni Raat
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Meri pehli date ek dating app se hui thi, aur shuruaat se hi sab galat ho raha tha. Main ek café pe pahunchi, woh doosre café pe — dono ka naam same tha, bas shehar ke do alag kone.
Jab tak main auto lekar pahunchi, bees minute late thi, baarish mein bheegi hui, aur mera kaajal meri naak tak aa gaya tha. Woh wahan baithi thi, do cold coffee ke saath, jismein se ek puri pighal chuki thi.
"Tumne jaan-boojh ke galat address diya na, test karne ke liye?" usne hanste hue poocha. Aur bas, saara nervousness ud gaya.
Hum teen ghante baithe rahe. Uske college ke kisse, meri office politics, aur yeh baat ki hum dono ne apne ghar walon ko abhi tak kuch nahi bataya. Us din pehli baar kisi ke saath baat karte hue mujhe apni ek bhi baat edit nahi karni padi.
Hum ab saath nahi hain — kuch mahine baad raaste alag ho gaye. Par jab bhi koi pehli date se ghabraata hai, main use yeh kahani sunaati hoon. Sab galat ho sakta hai, aur phir bhi din sundar ban sakta hai.
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